No.1 金句记诵

① I am writing to invite you to ... / I’m writing to tell you that there will be a ...我写信邀请你…… / 我写信告诉你将有……

② I am very pleased to invite you to participate in ... to be held from ... to ... in ...我很高兴邀请你参加从……到……在……举行的……

③ I have been admiring your deep appreciation of ... and wondering whether you will be so kind as to guide us on ...我一直很欣赏您对……的深刻理解，不知道您能否给我们介绍一下……

④ I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in ...我想你要是能来参加……那就太好了

⑤ It is my pleasure / a great honor for me to invite you to ...能邀请你参加……是我（莫大）的荣幸。

⑥ If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.如果你感兴趣，告诉我，我会给你发送更多的信息。

⑦Sorry for occupying your spare time, but we do hope you could join us and give us some advice.很抱歉占用了您的时间，但我们真的希望您能加入我们，给我们一些建议。

⑧ I am sure you will have a good time at ...我相信你在……将会玩得开心。

⑨ Here are some details about this activity. / The following are some details about this activity. / Some details about this activity are as follows.本次活动的一些细节内容如下。

No.2 佳作赏析

假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：

1. 球队活动；

2. 报名方式及截止日期。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Eric,

How’s everything going? The table-tennis team of our school is admitting new players. I’m sure it will appeal to you, for you have been enthusiastic about sports. Therefore, I’d like to invite you to join the team. Now the information in detail.

The team will hold a range of activities, including some training and matches. And some world-famous players will be invited to give lessons. If you are interested in it, you may either send an email to 123456@sina.com or sign up in person. The deadline is June 25th, 2017. I sincerely hope you could join us. Don’t hesitate to ask me if you have any questions.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

亲爱的埃里克，

一切都好吗？我们学校的乒乓球队正在招收新队员。我相信这一定很吸引你，因为你一直热衷于体育运动。因此，我想邀请你加入我们的团队。详情如下。

该队将举行一系列活动，包括一些训练和比赛。还会邀请一些世界著名的运动员来授课。如果你有兴趣，可以发邮件到123456@sina.com或亲自报名。截止日期是2017年6月25日。我真诚地希望你能加入我们。如果你有任何问题，尽管问我。

期待你的早日回复。

你的

李华

 No.1 金句记诵

① I am writing to ask for more information about it.我写信来询问更多关于它的消息。

② There are some pieces of information that I'd like to share with you.有一些消息我想要和你分享。

③ The most significant thing you should keep in mind is that…你需要记住的最重要的事情是...... 

No.2 佳作赏析

假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）。

ENJOY A RELAXING STUDY BREAK

IN BEAUTIFUL LANCASTER

-----------------------------------------

LANGUAGE CENTRE AND COLLEGE OF ARTS

UNIVERSITY OF LANCASTER

Languages* English * French * Spanish

Arts* Politics * Sociology * History

3wk, 6wk and 12wk courses

***

Reasonable fees

***

Accommodation service

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I've seen your ad, and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English courses.

First, when will the course start and how many Class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.

Would there be host family or university dormitory?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

No.1 金句记诵

① I would be very grateful if you could… 如果您能……我将感激不尽。

② I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.如您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。

③Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.谢谢您的关注，期待收到您尽早的回复。

④ If you need further information, do let me know.如您需要更多的信息，请告知我。

No.2 佳作赏析 

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help. I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, and I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.

Thank you for your kindness!

Yours,

Li Hua

亲爱的詹金斯女士,

我是上学期上您英语写作课的李华。我写信来请求您的帮助。我正在申请暑假期间在我所在城市的一家外企做兼职，我刚刚完成了我的求职信和简历。然而，我不太确定我所使用的语言和格式。我知道您的日程安排得很紧，所以如果您能花点时间检查一下，并做些必要的修改，我将不胜感激。附件是我的申请信和简历，请查收。

谢谢您的好意!

你的

李华